Sunday, 7 December 2014

Sunday Story - Lucy by Jonathan Hill


Jonathan Hill's story 'Lucy' was the winning story in April 2014's short fiction contest.

Lucy by Jonathan Hill

http://www.jhillwriter.com

Mother was outside sweeping leaves when the doll first spoke to Beth.

“I can’t see.”

Beth turned from her colouring-in. She was losing interest anyway, having gone outside the lines more than once.

“I can’t see.”

“Of course you can’t see,” Beth answered. “You’re a doll. You’re not real.”

“If I’m not real, how can I be talking to you?”

“It’s all pretend. My imagination is making you talk to me. You’re not really talking, silly!”

“Of course I’m really talking, you fucking stupid bitch.”

And that’s when Beth knew the doll really was talking. Because she hadn’t heard of several of those words, so how could she possibly have made her imagination make the doll speak them?

“If you’re real,” Beth asked nervously, “what’s your name?”

“My real name or the one your dumb bitch of a mother gave me when she was little?”

That word again. Bitch. What did it mean? And why was the doll staring at her like that? She shrugged.

“My real name is Lucy. Lucy Fur. It’s NOT Jemima. Who the fuck does your mother think she is? Naming things that already have a name. It’s like me deciding to change your name to Lady Gaga or Bruce Forsyth. You wouldn’t like that, Beth, would you?”

The doll knew Beth’s name? That was more unnerving to her than the fact the doll Mother had handed down to her was talking at all. And who were Lady Gaga and Bruce Forsyth? She shrugged again.

“You’re not very communicative, Beth, considering you’re a human and I’m a piece of plastic moulded into something that’s meant to look pretty. I’ll tell you something, lady. I may look pretty but inside I ain’t fucking pretty.”

Beth looked at Lucy a little more closely. No, she didn’t look any prettier than before. She decided to be honest. “I’ve always thought you ugly, especially with that hole where your eye should be.”

“Ah, that brings me to where we began our little tete-a-tete. I can only see out of one eye because when your mother was five, she dropped me out of a window.”

“I’m sure she didn’t mean…”

“She did. She fucking did. She wanted me to die. But I’m prepared to finally forgive her if you do something.”

Beth nodded slowly. She didn’t want Lucy to hate her mother.

“Come closer then!” said Lucy, before whispering into Beth’s ear.

“Are you sure?” asked Beth.

“Listen to what your mother says. The clues are all there,” reassured Lucy.

Downstairs, while Mother was watching the news on television, Lucy listened carefully for clues. Finally she heard one.

“I can’t bear to see all this misery in the world,” announced Mother, grimacing at plumes of smoke rising from a burning building.

So Lucy was right? Mother really didn’t want to see any more.

Taking the scissors from the kitchen drawer, she knew what she needed to do. She had to cut the bitch’s eyes out.

Friday, 5 December 2014

Guest Author Interview - Norm Hamilton

For this week's guest author interview I am joined by Norm Hamilton. Discover more about him and his writing below:

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Please introduce yourself, who are you and what do you do?
I like to tell people that I spent some time in Yukon—39 years, 8 months and 15 days, but who’s counting? Actually, all joking aside, we raised our two kids there and it was time well spent I assure you. I am now retired to Vancouver Island with my wife, Anna, where I am enjoying meeting people and experiencing new adventures.

A career bureaucrat—completely by accident not by design—I usually had some sort of sideline business going. These included such diverse services as photography (something I still do) and running a massage practice. I’ve built houses, rebuilt engines, and learnt to adapt from paper to digital. I’m a jack-of-all-trades and master of none. Oh yah, over the years I was also prompted to do some writing now and again.

What first inspired you to start writing?
I’ve always enjoyed writing but didn’t allow myself to delve into it much for many years. The thing that held me back was some misguided belief that everything I did had to generate income or it shouldn’t be done. I enjoy expressing myself with the written word, but overlooked many opportunities to do so.

More recently, I’ve written feature and news articles for local newspapers and publications in Yukon and Vancouver Island, including a column on photography that I wrote for a year. (The column articles are compiled into a book, The Digital Eye)

When I retired in the fall of 2012 I thought it’d be interesting to join the National Novel Writing Month (NaNoWriMo) to see if I could actually create something of interest. The voices in my head were restless and vociferous so I simply sat down and started putting words to screen.

What I learnt is that when I write fiction, I become immersed into the world and characters as they materialize in the narrative, dialogue and descriptions that appear as I create.

Where did the idea for 'From Thine Own Well: Canada After The Fracking' come from?
The inspiration for From Thine Own Well came from my own frustration and resentment over the Harper government in Canada signing an agreement with China that allows Chinese corporations to sue Canadian governments if those governments do anything that interfere with the corporation’s profits. Such lawsuits will be heard by secret tribunal rather than in open court.

Extensive research uncovered the issues that may occasion with that kind of agreement. I studied the dangers of fracking and irresponsible mining. At that time, in Yukon, the Peel Watershed Commission was consulting with stakeholders, environmental experts and First Nations to gather information so the government could make an informed decision on what to do with that pristine area. In the book I wrote that the Peel Watershed was opened to development and resource extraction and described the devastating results that could entail, never thinking for a moment that anyone would be irresponsible enough to actually allow it to happen.

I was wrong. In 2014 the Yukon government opened the area to mines and oil and gas companies in abject opposition to the recommendations of the Commission. But I digress.

So began my journey into a dystopian world that developed as I met and learnt about the characters in the story and lived their lives vicariously. It is the culmination of my fear, bias, imagining and hopefulness. I’m pleased to share it with you.

What influences have there been on your writing?
Stephen King and Justin Cronin fascinate me with their ability to imagine and create worlds, creatures and people that are terrifying.

Margaret Atwood’s “The Handmaid's Tale” struck me as one of the finest dystopian novels ever. I loved the movement through the society and characters she created and the descriptions that left nothing to the imagination. One can fathom the world she describes as coming to be. Fahrenheit 451 by Ray Bradbury and of course, Orwell’s 1984, are similar in their possibility of becoming real. I like dystopia that reads like reality.

The award for research and adherence to authenticity has to go to Ken Follett. From his World War II novels to the epic volumes of The Pillars of the Earth series and the Century Trilogy, one lives those epochs through his words.

More recently, indie writers like Martyn V. Halm (Amsterdam Assassin Series), Carmen Amato (Emilia Cruz Series) and Erec Stebbins (Daughter of Time Series) have monopolized my reading life and stimulated my senses. They are living proof that independent, self-published authors can create novels comparable to those published by traditional houses.

I have read indie writers exclusively for the past 18 months and have been wonderfully pleased overall. They are far too numerous to list here, but I have written reviews on many of them on my website.

What makes your stories stand out?
My readers are foremost in my mind. I like to think that what makes my stories distinctive is the emotional response elicited. When I write, I experience what the reader will feel.

I’ve been known to sit in front of my laptop enraged, slamming the keys down in an attempt to bang the words out as fast as they formed in my pounding head. I have also slumped, sobbing before the same laptop as the characters in my story go through a particularly gut-wrenching occurrence.

Either way, the intent is that my fiction generates emotion.

What was the last book you read?
The last book I read prior to completing this interview was “Vessel” by Andrew J. Morgan. This is a science fiction piece that involves the National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA), the Russian Federal Space Agency (RFSA) and the continuation of the International Space Station (ISS) together. Morgan does a remarkable job of creating two corresponding story lines, one on earth, the other 240 miles in space.

What is your favourite song lyric?
This is a tough one as there are so many wondrously talented lyricists in the world, both today and in years past. It seems to me that the lyrics I’m currently listening to are my favourite. That said, the song, ‘Til We Meet Again, by Johnny Reid has some words that I would happily share with all of you:

May the sun shine on your shoulders
May luck and love be your friends
For now, always, forever; ‘til we meet again


What are you working on at the moment?
At the present time I am working on honing my short story skills. I’m taking instruction from experts in the field and practicing the craft. I’ve created several and am about to start on a memoir piece, written as a short story.

Although I am feeling the urge to write another novel, I haven’t had the final push to begin … yet.

Tell us about your latest release and how we can find out more.
My latest release is the aforementioned, From Thine Own Well: Canada After The Fracking. Although it is not the tanks, guns, vampire or apocalypse kind of dystopia we often see, it is a world and situation that is feasible and, sadly, possible. As I said earlier, some of the things I wrote about in 2012 are now taking place. Readers find it disconcerting because of its probability. It has been well received and I’m pleased that it generates dialogue on the subject.

The description of the book reads:

Disillusioned former Yukon mining exploration worker, Landon McGuire, is torn from his self-imposed exile into a Canada he no longer recognizes. Water is a precious commodity, and the environment is contaminated. Individual rights are non-existent and corporate rule is the law—a law enforced by the corporation’s own brutal militia.

Unregulated fracking and irresponsible mining have destroyed the watersheds. A small group of people band together to combat the ruling coalition, but find themselves embroiled in a dangerous game. Landon meets Nora and is drawn into the fray. What begins as a fact-finding mission turns deadly as they get closer to the truth.

Deceit, threats and violent encounters emphasize the reality that economy trumps environment even when lives are at stake.


Click here to buy From Thine Own Well from Amazon US / Amazon UK

Thursday, 4 December 2014

ABC Drabbles of Death - Z is for Zombie


We've reached the end of our journey through the alphabet with the ABC Drabbles of Death series. It's been a fun ride and I hope you've enjoyed the drabbles in the series. My choice of word for 'Z' is a little obvious, but I think it is a fitting end.

If you've not read the previous drabbles in the series then you'll find them all here:

http://thecultofme.blogspot.co.uk/p/welcome-to-first-drabble-in-my-new.html

Next week will see the start of a new drabble series :-)

Z is for Zombie

My memories crumbled beneath the endless hunger. It didn’t happen immediately. Enough time passed for me to comprehend the monster I’d become. They say you always remember your first and that proved true. I still remember chewing through my wife’s face.

I wish that memory had vanished first.

That moment led to a greater horror. Then another. Followed by more until my memories flooded with blood and gore.

Locked in my decaying meat prison I feared the end of my faculties but also prayed to witness no more. Soon I will be no more and exist only for the hunger.

Wednesday, 3 December 2014

Short Story Review - Whiskey Devil by Christian Galacar

I'm a fan of short stories and this is a good one about a family suffering from an abusive father. There's some good build up and the author writes well. The pivot point is very good, but it peters out after that point with the ending being quite sudden. It's a satisfactory ending but I would have liked to have seen it developed more.

It does however suffer from one of my pet peeves in e-books and that's padding with the  author's other content. The short story ends at 80% and then there's a chapter for another book. A shout out, or a link is fine, but a fifth of the content devoted to another book is a bit much.

That aside this is a decent short story and you feel for the characters as the plot progresses. With more development it could have been a great story.

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Bobby Trask is a twelve-year-old kid in a bad place. His father is an abusive drunk with muddled religious views, and his mother, as hard as she tries to defend her son, only ever ends up delaying the inevitable. Things take a turn for the worse one Friday when Bobby brings home a black eye from school. The following day his father brings him out into the woods on mission to do “God’s Work” and bring him into adulthood.

A coming of age story about the sins of a father and a boy’s chance to absolve himself from them.


Click here to buy Whiskey Devil from Amazon US / Amazon UK (and it's a decent short story)
 

Tuesday, 2 December 2014

Book Review - Reciprocal Paranoia by Mike Freeman

This is the fourth book in the author's 'Contact' series. It continues the series well, but is a bit of a dip in the books so far. In the previous books there was a balance between the action and the discovery. In this book there is little discovery and it's mostly action with some strategic discussion. The number of perspectives also seems greater creating a more fragmented feel to the story. For me it also meant that I didn't get to spend enough time with the characters.

So the book didn't quite match my expectations compared to the earlier ones, however it's far from a bad read. The author writes well, especially the action scenes. The pacing is good and I zipped through the story quickly.

A high point came in the form of a comedy of errors which provided some unexpected humour. It also marked a switch in the story from the more reflective first half into the faster paced second half.

So while I raised a number of problems in this review I still enjoyed reading the book and I've immediately bought the next in the series.

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Trust no one…

There is no trust in the system as the Talmas-infected humans advance their agenda and the civilizations prepare for war. The remnants of the Alliance team flee the towers while, beneath the surface, Stone is oblivious to the People’s Republic marines closing in for the kill…

RECIPROCAL PARANOIA is a hard hitting space opera/ scifi adventure. It is the FOURTH book in the Contact series.

Rated [R]. Violence, sex, profanity.
US English. 115,000 words.

Click here to buy Reciprocal Paranoia from Amazon US / Amazon UK (and it's an ok continuation of the series)